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thanks everyone for the review I'll work on it and by the way blondeshorhty its from the heart

Some of the most superb feelings and tingling emotions come from what love an Angel, such as yourself, and I make. Our world, as we have come to see it, ...

the ANOTHER concept is beautiful and you did a good work putting it together but it would have been more interesting and have more mean if you had placed a ...

You sure know how to make your words and expression sound beautiful, its a great work you did here but it will be even greater if your words contain more ...

Hi Tarshni, that I must say is a great work and I love your use of expression and you deserve around of applause. But I will like to add that ...

I have heard so many people talk about their first love, today I'll tell of mine, my first true love. She loved me and still loves me, her love for ...

I must say this is a very nice work, i have been out of the game for a while and I think what you did here got me a little ...

It takes courage to write a poem nd I see such courage been displayed in your work, its really a combination of beautiful expression. But still you could do more ...

Am amazed! If this is wat drowning experience is like then I'll never learn to swim. I love your use of words and your power of description, I felt as ...

Ehmmmm..... That was impressive I must say I enjoyed reading through the poem your use of description was quite good. But, there still much you can do with this idea ...

i kind of like your profile but i dont think you do any thing for fun you should try going out instead of watching lord of the ring :) . ...

I loved your use of words the way they flow but men did i not understand what the poem was about.

Below am going to rewrite the poem to help with the repition There's a fold in this paper, A crease, a line, A literal wrinkle in a moment in time. ...

I loved this poem of yours it was properly expressed and your use of words were cool kee up the good work.

I love reading this poem it was beautiful. Keep writings